All Comments on 'Coloring as Fast as I Can'

by sandspike

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dreamsweetdreamsweetover 19 years ago
color and emotion

I love the metaphor of color to emotion and almost the childlike wonder about how to label emotions.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in todays reviews

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in todays reviews

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
this is good

and it has so much more potential. You should get out the crayons and color this a little more.

duckiesmutduckiesmutover 19 years ago
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As someone who's always found difficulty "staying in the lines", in regard to both coloring and emotions, i very much enjoyed this. Especially:

"Don't paint me in a corner

that's where the lines begin."

Lovely. :)

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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I'm with duckiesmut on this one.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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I've said it before, how you know this is good because you want the poet to continue on...

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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