All Comments on 'The Dead World Ch. 04'

I like the story. But when Charlie /Charlene , spoke in Such A Derogatory Manner to Dog / Danny. I hope to see the next chapter soon.

I like the story, been waiting for the next chapter. I hope to see it soon.

Waiting for next chapter impatiently

"BAD DOG!"

I LOVE IT 💕

Eagerly headed to read the next chapter!

Suspenseful and exciting! I love the characters you created especially Dog

Great storytelling. You handle the conundrum well. Is Dog bad if he doesn't truly understand what he's doing is wrong? You do it in such a way that you neither excuse his actions nor glorify them, and yet we understand if not condone.

And then there's Charlie, forced to choose the lesser of two evils. Be exposed and risk being brutally raped, or let the creepy kid get touchy / feely with her buy hopefully maintain some control over the situation?

On to the next chapter.

so many good things happening here... i don't know where to start

very good story indeed