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Outstanding...
The best i've seen in a long while.
Very good
A short humorous story. I enjoyed it very much.
That's a pretty great and funny story.
It had everything, love, lust, a huge array of "tools", and a large amount of tongue-in-cheek humor.
You are Very Good
Welcome to the appreciation you deserve.
Read both your efforts - nice touch - nice delivery - very human dialog and thoughts.
More Please - Thanks and Regards
You ROCK!
I needed a good laugh, and that did it! I love your stories!
Laughed out loud
A rarity from me, audible laughter. And I happened to be reading this at work. Good thing the guests weren't up yet!
It's readable, it's believable, and I have put you in my personal favorites.
2 Stars, and lucky to get that
2 Stars, and lucky to get that...
It had the makings of a good story, right until you blew it with the last paragraph.
Waste of a decent storyline, and a waste of time reading it,,
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