All Comments on 'Blood Love Ch. 02'

by aysa69

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Nice

A couple of distractions that an editor could have resolved. Don't hesitate to get one. Tnx

Jeff818Jeff818about 19 years ago
Good Job

I enjoyed your story. A very erotic scenario.

fakers51fakers51almost 19 years ago
A Solid story

A solid story between sister and brother with alittle bit of caring, sharing, lust and love all bundle up in the bedroom on the bed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
All in the Family

Chapter 2 is very well done. I can't wait to read the next chapter. At this point I don't care about the Alexia character having been cheated on by her former boyfriend because her love-lust for her brother, and vice versa, could've been revealed without that plot device. However, I admit, I haven't read beyond Chapter 2, so for all I know the plot device involving Alexia's ex will become part of the action. OK, I'll be patient. For now, I'm enjoying your writing -- both your craft and the incestuous eroticism between Christian and Alexia. And, by the way, that's quite bodacious of you to name an incestuous character "Christian"! Naughty girl, you.

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