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Legend Of Mystic Forest Ch. 01

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by Anonymous12/23/04

learn the language

You must get your time line streight. Is it now or 5 years ago, is it day or night. You sleep all night to get up and shoot infrared film during day or night.

Do not forget the old adage "got" is a weed in the garder of grammer

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by Anonymous12/23/04

Truely beautiful

Your tale is warm and heart felt, in fact, sorry to say, it's just to "good" to be in Literotica.

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by cookiejar12/23/04

Almost dreamlike...

Your words spin a soft, lovely tale. I live in a forest setting and I felt, saw, and heard each sentence. Very pretty and so romantic!

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by GoddessOfSouls12/29/04

Mmmmmmm Lovely

The ability to show others the beauty you see in your woodland paradise, untouched by human changes, reading your words makes me long for a touch of Magic in the world around us again. Very Well Done, I enjoyed it
Welcome Chubby I look forward to more of your stories

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by staggerlee01/18/05

Mystical

Wonderful, mystical story. You put me in the forrest in a dreamlike state.

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