All Comments on 'Christmas with Scott'

A great story that stands on its own, but is even more erotic when taken as a part of the author's body of work. Consistently strong, boneriffic stuff.

Between boring and exciting d/s

and more so, their interplay...

Fun I like how it was about you

this is some of your early work, so I won't nit-pic the tense shifts and punctuation mishaps. :)

I think if you were to re-write this now, you'd do a much better job at gradually building up the excitement and conveying the tension of control, submission and final release. Probably all men with a sub streak DO want to serve, pleasure and satisfy a Mistress... but secretly long for a moment of passion when Mistress 'submits' and surrenders herself to be FUCKED.

"DC"

I will do your bidding any time