by Stryderthorongil
This is a heartbreaking poem. I think you did a nice job with the repetition-- the explanation of why you were alone becoming more and more clear. Very touching poem.
riveting from beginning to end! I'm so glad I chose to read this!
You brought tears to my eyes. There's really nothing more that I can say right now.
Your Poem has been mentioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the read~
MET
A true mirror of sorrow and grief that too many know and few can express.
One of those pieces which leave its words upon your mind and in your heart its beautiful thank you for sharing
Oh my I thought this was very moving because today I recieved my engagment ring, and he means so very much to me I am glad that he didnt wait until it was to late.. I am going to read more of your writings ...
This was amazingly written. The words made me feel what was being portrayed. Keep writing and I will keep reading!!
to be able to put such descriptive words to make such a powerful statement
It is sooo well written. We always wish we could have said more or could have done more but the reality is that we are all afraid. Afraid of feeling those feelings or showing those feelings or just being vulnerable to someone who could quite possibly and in all actuality, break our heart. I find it's never too late though to say what you need to say, because sometimes tomorrow never comes. Well done!