You use such vivid details, I can visualize the erotic event! Ummmmmmmm......
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Anonymous12/26/04
Good
Not great, I could go for more details, but all around a solid story.
by
Anonymous12/29/04
Says what needs to be said and leaves some unsaid
Very explicit, but also leaves a great deal to our ever processing and overactive imaginations. If you find the process of filling in the details and drawing in your own roadma of reality an utter turn on, then this story is outstanding. I do and that is why this story is an utter delite. This story is extraordinarily hot without being pornographic or trashy. And there are shades of romance in it. If you don't like it, read it when you are in a different mood.
English
brilliance
A brilliant start. This is obviously fact - so now try fiction. Audio too/ You will be a star
can you illustrate your next story?
You use such vivid details, I can visualize the erotic event! Ummmmmmmm......
Good
Not great, I could go for more details, but all around a solid story.
Says what needs to be said and leaves some unsaid
Very explicit, but also leaves a great deal to our ever processing and overactive imaginations. If you find the process of filling in the details and drawing in your own roadma of reality an utter turn on, then this story is outstanding. I do and that is why this story is an utter delite. This story is extraordinarily hot without being pornographic or trashy. And there are shades of romance in it. If you don't like it, read it when you are in a different mood.
A Nice Story
Good stuff. Makes me want to schedule a wake-up call.
incredible story
it is described clearly and brillant. That scene stay in my imagination and I'm aroused :) more at pm :D :D :D
great morning ~hellbaby~ ;)
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