I liked it! Simple and to the point, yet well-written all the same. Maybe a bit more background would be helpful though; I understand the "in media res" style, but it's a bit confusing all the same.
I hope that you write some more about the Macabre Court, I LOVE THEM!=)=D Vampires are my favorites=) Love Carrie from Sweden
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!
orBack to Kashka Ch. 03
orMore submissions by Silentwriter9.
Edit comment orSubmit Comment
Comment posted successfully - click here to view it or write another.
Title of your comment:
Your public comment about Kashka Ch. 03:
Please type in the security codeYou may also listen to a recording of the characters.
Title your feedback:
Your feedback to Silentwriter9:
If you would like a response, enter your email address in this box:
Feedback sent successfully - click here to write another.
Login or Sign Up
All contents © Copyright 1998-2012. Literotica is a trademark. No part may be reproduced in any form without explicit written permission.
Terms Of Services|Report A Problem|Privacy
Password:Forgot your password?
Your current user avatar, all sizes:
You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.
Select new user avatar:
Upload and save
User avatar uploaded successfuly and waiting for moderation.