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Lost your pussy lately?

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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve12/21/04

this is almost like really good but...

Should this be erotic? Some of the pussy lines are corny and those corny lines are mixed in with some really, really good lines. Actually, the pussy lines are fine, but they should be with another poem. I feel like this poem needs more attention to reach it's full potential. It's promising, but not quite there.

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by templeminded12/21/04

you're bad

you're bad about loosing them pussies. better watch them more closely...........lol

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