All Comments on 'Convention Weekend with Mom Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Excellent slow build . looking forward to rest of story

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 6 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love

prop69prop69about 6 years ago
AWESOME...

Can't wait for the next chapter.

She needs his love and tender affection

rodavrodavabout 6 years ago
Exciting story

Hope that that his Mother's friend who owned the house catches them and tells them that she does her son too.

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More...please..

Ok have mom succeed with the client, rub it in the face of her boss, then her son and her celebrate with a night of fucking..hard fucking.. legs on his shoulders, pantyhose at her waist then have them go home and she divorces dad and he knocks her up

xsiveonexsiveoneabout 6 years ago
Great beginning!

A good start to what will likely be a romantic and great series. Take it where you will! I'll wait anxiously for the next chapter. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

Have the client she is meeting get her drunk and coerce her into sex. Have her reluctantly let herself be taken. He refuses to use a condom and cums in her as she begs him not to because she's not on birth control !!!

sabra16023sabra16023about 6 years ago
Outstanding Story

Well written. Calls for more chapters. Thanks

ekim22ekim22about 6 years ago
Yep, well written

Loved the choice of lingerie :)

Hoping that the next round will show her being more reluctant and needing to be "convinced" :)

kkrewkkrewabout 6 years agoAuthor
Damn! Thanks!

Wow all, thanks for the feedback and the comments. I didn't anticipate this, I'm working on Pt 2 but time is limited for me to work on this sort of thing. Hopefully you will all enjoy what I have for it, I had already written the outline but there was some good ideas here and in private feedback I'm trying to roll in.

rightbankrightbankabout 6 years ago
An interesting start

with lots of potential. But life has a way of surprising us. Potential can be both uplifting and cause us to crash and burn.

I see some of the usual suggestions, get her pregnant, bring in unheard 3rd parties,drive dad out of the picture. But I could make a suggestion it would be to keep it simple, personal, romantic, with a slow development between the two principal characters. Please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
LOVE IT: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟- [5- (4.6/5)]. The storyline was brilliantly conceived & masterfully crafted. VERY VERY EROTIC! ROMANTIC TOO!

My cup of tea, totally... & then some!

kkrew masterfully created a difficult situation that, in terms of emotions, brought mom & son closer together. The situation amounted to a perfect storm, wherein the inconceivable becomes the order of the day!

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