by IamVermilion
Now we have the middle and we're only missing the beginning and the end. Usually I like the exercise of fantasizing what's missing, but in this case I'd like the author to provide a little more. Some background in addition to a trivial anecdote about a coat. And a direction where this relationship is going. I'm not sure I would fantacize a long term relationship for them. It might well not fit. Perhaps it is just enough for the reading audience to create a begining and an end for themselves - not sure, but it is worth a 4*