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Christmas without Mommy

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by skip.6912/23/04

Almost heartbtreaking

What a strong poem. I sincerely hope that the story you tell is a little embellished, and that mommy did not disappear for two whole weeks. It certainly brought a lump to my throat as I read it, though. Well done!

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by Anonymous12/24/04

wah!

Waaah! Thank God she came back! I remember my first year in college, and I found out my mom had to work on Christmas day and I cried for about an hour.... thinking of what Christmas would be like without her. Hope this was fictional, even with the happy ending it is traumatic.

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by LeBroz01/28/07

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One of those pieces you'd best have tissues handy.

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by LeBroz04/08/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.



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