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One should not read this without having a willing woman to take up the position described! Lovely simplicity. I can smell the mix of the scent of fresh grass and woman. Though you don't mention either, your poem conjured it up as part of the scene in my imagination.

Delightful sketch too Rhinoguy.

Sensual poetry at its best. Describes very well the scene and Rhinoguy's drawing puts the icing on the erotic cake.

.. such a sweet little poem.

First thought ~ yum. Now that's what I call the perfect snack food.

First thought ~ yum. Now that's what I call the perfect snack food.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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in a secluded place. TK U MLJ LV NV