All Comments on '15 Years Later'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Touching story, well told...but

Always, always, ALWAYS, insert a form of punctuation (you know the sort of thing: comma, peroid,

exclamation/question mark) before a close quote mark!

To paraphrase the credit card commercial: Don't leave quote without it!

lust_4_ulust_4_uover 16 years ago
great job!

This was simple yet told in a way I think a lot of your readers could relate and enjoy. I hope you will think about writing another story - maybe a class reunion where these two meet again?

lust_4_u.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Oh wow, outstanding!

How lucky can one get!

tazz317tazz317about 7 years ago
FAMILY FUNERALS CREATE STRANGE HABITS

but the old fashioned cure works wonders, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Well!!! Where the he!l is rest of it?!!!

You can't and must not cliff-hang like this!

It's really mean!!!

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