All Comments on 'Big Dirk Allen and the Tiny Blonde II'

Very good work. I hope this is developed into a series longer than two stories.

Are you planning on laying out SWSO's rules? i.e. Nothing good happens until midnight? Never look a trojan horse in the mouth? You only live once until you learn how?

I loved your humour and scenarios mixing so many facets into the chapter, the characters were good and the writing warmed the body and brain in all the right ways :)

Loved the Spinal Tap and Chili Peppers call outs. Also the rock hard monument to manhood. Will there be more?

I am loving this series! Love the way your mind works. Can't wait for more!

I think the best thing about this one is Dirk's father. I heard every nagging mother stereotype from every movie. And OMG, I love the super judgmental computer! Just everything was hot and hilarious. I hope you post more of these. Daily would be nice, but no pressure.

I'm really enjoying your sense of humour and style, and the sex too!

"Did you want to slap him?"

"no"

"Then he's not Australian"!

Brilliant! (and I'm not just saying that as I'm from NZ!!)

you have a warped mind. great look for more slap hapy papy #9