All Comments on 'The Abandoned Son Ch. 04'

The people you wrote about dont match your original characters there's not even any mentioning of them. Would like to know if this is some sort of a mistake or not.

Yes, definitely a mistake.

Seems my computer decided to override the story with a different one. It'll be fixed soon.

Good to know I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Don't know how the f... that happened. But I've uploaded the back up file so once lit okies it, it'll be up.

almost thought maybe it was a flashback or something at first. but I'm glad to see that its being dealt with.

A quick cursory glance at the first page and the names of the characters within left me addled.

I was wondering who the hell were Beverley, Beverage, Mary, Mara, Margret, Scarlet and Jason!

What on earth is going on? I was really looking forward to this only it's not even the right story.

Apparently, you don't read the comments whoever you are.

Looking forward to reading the real chapter when lit approves it, also hoping you’ll upload the next A Son Forced chapter soon! Keep up the good work!

Yeah, working on the next chapter for A son forced. I should have it done here soon.

Well, the story has been accepted, now it appears it be sometime between now and 48 hours before the real The Abandoned Son story will appear. If it doesn't me an lit will have words.

Okay, the real story is up hope y'all like it.

Definitely worth waiting for. Excellent read. Hope you will keep going too.

Thanks and thanks for reading turtle

I am sure it takes a lot of effort to write your stories so thank you for that.

To find a "but" I prefer when they are a little longer ....

"but" that's only because I enjoy them

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Anyword on when we'll get the next chapter

Don't know yet.

If Damien had a plate in front of him, it would be get full: Mary, as the meat, his father, as the potatoes, and the girls father as the gravy. Getting the dvd back would be the desert. Can't have that out there in his line of work.

Loved the story!

You can not quit this story it one of your best

need part 5 asap

Can't wait for more. Living all your stories

Just reread this story and am desperate for a continuation of it. Would love a full story with many more chapters. Your stories are great please give us more.

Working on it as we speak. This one, Strawter family, and the Haunting of McKay manor will be the last serials I write. They too will be done here shortly.

That being said there may and I say may be a spin off of Family Secrets. I just don't know yet.

I just submitted part 5 it should be up in a few days.

The art gallery thing is a bit over the top! Good compromise his secret.

This is a very interesting story keep going 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!