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by Anonymous06/01/09

Cool!

You're getting better. Though it would have been nice if you hadn't written the character Kiara so cold hearted. It would have been nice if she had done something to comfort her friend instead of just going to bed.

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by Anonymous07/02/09

bit blunt

nice idea but u need to elaborate, not quite wank worthy

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