All Comments on 'Blackout Valentines Day Orgy'

I felt there was more to tell in this story before it ended. Conversation or "deep thoughts" or even a paragraph in retrospective would have pulled the story's rating to 5.

The story ended too soon. What happened when the orgy was done, did everyone just leave? What happen between the two of them afterwards. No mention of how many cocks or pussies she may have eaten or sucked on. No mention of the two of them talking about how many loads of cum she got in her mouth and pussy, or perhaps her ass. Did he get anything from his wife, another woman, or perhaps one of the guys. A lot of possibilities that never materialized. Need more to the story. Otherwise it was a good start. I have had fantasies about something similar only all the guys and gals were bi so anything was possible.

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My only criticism is that after the initial shock of the unknown people in the room, she didn't cry out "fuck me", "eat me", and as many other phrases that would have highlighted her pleasure and that of the reader.

What a great way to party.xoxoxoxoxo Annette

Newly edited version coming soon

The set was promising. The sex was hot, the characters vivid. But how did it end? Where and how did everybody cum? We need more details...

Oh my God, that was amazing!