by ScentualEncounters
I'm happy that you got the courage to publish and I hope you get the well deserved positive feedback.
but it is quite good in terms of content and fairly good rhymes. Nice going! Yes, sometimes a good fuck stripped of all but cock and cunt is a savior.
...with substance. Your poem tells a story. Not a happy one, either. On the quality of your writing, five stars and a favorite. I hope you didn't have the experience that your poem reflects.