All Comments on 'An Adequate Diversion'

by rydia57

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Please come to the next wedding I attend!!

Brava!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Unexpected!

Again, you do a wonderful job of building the excitement of unexpected sex. In just a few sentences you establish the personality differences between the three men... I find myself identifying with Paul, the quiet one.

It's a turn-on that you confess some intimate feminine 'secrets'- that you would "lube bigtime" from contact with a guy you like; that you felt the NEED to "relieve" yourself..... that the wetness of your excitement would flow onto Paul, between your legs.

"DC"

bigd2k622bigd2k622almost 14 years ago

Enjoyed the build up of the story. Great use of words.

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