Again, you do a wonderful job of building the excitement of unexpected sex. In just a few sentences you establish the personality differences between the three men... I find myself identifying with Paul, the quiet one.
It's a turn-on that you confess some intimate feminine 'secrets'- that you would "lube bigtime" from contact with a guy you like; that you felt the NEED to "relieve" yourself..... that the wetness of your excitement would flow onto Paul, between your legs.
Enjoyed the build up of the story. Great use of words.
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