by Ijustmight71
All brothers and sisters should experience such uninhibited love.
An outstanding submission. I look forward to reading more of your writings.
I love stories where the sex ramps up, first I just want to touch them, and then...
Whew!!!!!
Damn I loved it. I’m no English Lit major! Just a Doctor who scribbles to where people can’t read my writing....
As (prepositions here), to the story line, uncontrollable build up and plain heat I really was into the whole picture. I felt like I was just waiting for someone in the family to catch them.
Nicely done!!!! Please follow up with more chapters.
Thank You.....
Yes, very hot and the back and forth comments were very good plus the physical actions. Obviously, his sister enjoyed it as she would have stopped him if it bothered her. Since he came in her twice - I am sure she wanted it too. Hopefully, she will want to feel his cock again and maybe they will go down on the beach at night and his wife and her husband will stay at the house; while they go do it hard and deep. More please, thank you.
One of the best mature brother and sister stories
Fake tits was a good addition. Loved the way you built the story from just a "little peek" to "can I touch " them. Then just moving on their own
Can't wait for the next chapter when they talk about what happened. Will this be a "One and out" or the start of more? One of the 2 spouses is not fucking or maybe they play Truth or Dare and play with each other ending in a swap.
So many ways to take the next chapter.
Racist!!! JK, lol, I think it is supposed to be criss cross or something.
Great story. Nice set up, with good action. Hope there’s a sequel or two.
My gosh, you are such a talented writer! It's a shame that you quit submitting stories here! 5 Stars!