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All Comments on 'Galactic Merge'

by KyaloJunior41

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arrowglassarrowglassabout 6 years ago
Good start.....but

Way too short!

FieroGT1988FieroGT1988about 6 years ago
not a good start for the hero.

here we go the hero is killed in the first seconds of the story? Humor maybe? Good opening but how do you get out of this little pickle?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
That's it?

The big opener where in nothing really happened or developed to pull me in and subscribe for updates.

Needs more per chapter

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