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by Tathagata12/29/04

what a

great memory.
and presented with just the right amount of nostalgia and tenderness.
Nice job

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by sack12/29/04

Pretty amazing

And much more convincing (to me anyway) than your "E" rated story. One couplet might have flowed better as follows:
"Now you can buy me drink and sit down next to me". Otherwise, pretty darn outstanding!

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