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Becoming the Perfect Husband

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/04/05

I loved it! Very visual

Oh, Twisted,

This was great! The best I have read lately.. Don't be discouraged by nay-sayers. There are always those of timid hearts and weak souls. Others will enjoy your grace, I can't wait to read more.

Vee Rich

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by Anonymous01/07/05

Great! please write more!

Great! please write more!Loved Sister Catherine!

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by Bruno102707/11/05

This is one of the best stories I've ever read

on here. I loved it! Please write more.

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by Anonymous08/20/06

Nice, but...

I would have liked to see how he became so accepting and the struggles he had to go through with Sister Catherine

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by Anonymous11/22/08

Twisted love it

nice twisted story but i hope a part two doesn t take the easy way out and not bring some pain to the wife; she isn t miss goody two shoes and hubby isn t a wimp . .

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by Tiedupp02/20/09

Get the Wife and the Nun

I am so tempted to write a part two, very twisted story love it but the wife and the Nun aren t angels and
shouldn t get away with torturing the hubby, in part two the hubby needs to turn the tables and slamp both the nun and wife hard and bring back some balance into the marrage.

For the nun slamming he might tell another nun and hook up a web cam and then get the wifey to visit the nun, that would be great for starters . . . should i do it ? ?

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by Anonymous09/09/13

Sister Catherine is going to hell

Where she belongs.

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by Anonymous02/12/14

Sister Catherine from the Church of Bitches?

Drop kick the Sister after you report her activities to the Head Nun. Then go home, pack your clothes and leave. Visit the divorce attorney. Move a LONG ways away and start a life with someone that actually might love and respect you. Not these two bat shit crazy women. Horrible story.

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by Anonymous05/31/14

Tell the Sister you would be speaking to her Boss - soon.

Then go home, stop in the garage, pull the plug, cut the band off and throw those things and the bag in the trash. Tell your "wife" you're done with the Sister and if she can't live with it, show her the door. Even for fiction this was ridiculous.

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