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Very nice!!
Excellent word imagery in a such a small compass. A good example of "less is more". Thanks for sharing your genius!
I simply
love it. Excellent poem.
Awesome
Not even questioning the smile of knowing that crossed my face when i read this poem. great job!
v~
that last verse
~But that's my soul just there
Greeting the chandelier
Shamelessly flirting amongst
Dangerous crystals
Illuminated and bedazzled~
great images and perfect word choices.
very Nice
thank you
Well Written!
An excellent example of a well written erotic poem. You don't have to be graphic to be sexy. This poem is a good step above the normal Lit. erotic offering.
Nicely done - Thank you.
there is a delicate restraint shown here
the subtlety within the poem is enhanced by your subtle wording. Wonderful poem...
jim : }
Good balance and movement
I enjoyed the balance of this poem, the short lines slowing the reading through the first half and then the sudden leap with the soul into the chandelier. Good images there, and a good control of diction that nicely expresses both the actions and the emotions. Thanks for a pleasant read.
"Just there"
Those two words "made" this for me. So casual, yet so revealing. ~Imp
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