by Skellos
How is this classified as an illustrated story? The artwork is crap. Looks like a 2 year old drew it. I didn’t even get to the story after I scrolled through it looking for decent illustrations.
Um, if a story is in the Illustrated category, shouldn't it have illustrations??
TBH the pics are something you would draw as a reference for descriptive reminders !
But stuff them anyway !
This has the makings of a good story !!
Please carry on with it !
Hi, thanks for the comment on 04/09/18 Mr. Anonymous.
For the previous 2 Mr Anonymous and Sex4lf57, I did send a message to the admins to have the type changed to Non-Human as were all previous chapters but they still haven't changed it. Sorry if you expected images and got a story instead. You can always google Shadyss to find actual pictures of her and some other relative felines.
I'm a little surprised the mods let this post. There's no age given to Wasp and her only descriptions are she's small and has been imprisoned. Personally I really believe you should have included some kind of hint at her age causes it feels a touch like underage sex.
Wasp is not a child. The emphasis on her small size was meant to show the contrast with Shadyss's giant size. I guess it could have been explained differently. I'll pay attention to this in the future. Thanks for your comment.