All Comments on 'Her First Cock'

Ember, Mav....just wanted to say that I loved the story, it was avery sensual, and erotic tale. I also loved seeing the mix of ''regular'' story telling and the chat text, that definitely gives it a more realistic quality, having two different perspectives on such an event. Great job you two...hopefully there are more collaborations like your own in the future.

But the story lead in and closure were very well written. set the role play text up really well.

Great job! Can't wait to read what comes next

:)

A nice little exchange between the two of you! So, do another ;)

Making her a gorgeous Mulatto from New Orleans would have made a good story great,,,Love that chatte noire