It Couldn't Be Helped Ch. 02

Great Story!!!

Great Story...Please I want to know more about what happens between Crystal and Sean!!!

great story!!

VERY GOOD WRITING!

Awesome!

At first, I hated* Chapter 1 because I didn't like how Sean pettily stood her up just out of revenge. But I'm really enjoying how things are developing. Keep up the great writing!


*ok, I won't say "hated." Obviously it was a riveting story. I just didn't like how he acted. The story itself was still great!

Great Story

I'm loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

My Brotha..

good story man, both parts. each scene is so detailed and scripted....very true to life situations. this was more than just an erotic or romantic piece my man, it drops a message....and i got it. keep that finger on the pulse

it was really neat

loved the story.cant wait to read wat happens next...

This is your first story?

I've read both chapters and enjoyed them both. The buildup has been very well done. If the next chapter(s) are as good it will be very entertaining.

Nice Touch

By that I mean your in touch and can convey it - nice background and build. Its real enough to touch - very good work. More Please

very real

Your characters are so real you have me thinking did this happen or is your imagination that dread... i don't think I have to tell you keep writing but I will surly keep looking out for you...

I love a man who knows what a girl wants to read..

Very, very, VERY nice!!!!

In it til the end

Reading all the way to the end! I love this!!!!!

At first I was not too sure about this story but this chapter swayed me

I like this!

Finally a story that show a real side in interracial dating. I like a good romance but it is good to have a little reality as well.