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The Delight Of Him

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by Tathagata12/31/04

your poem

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by flyguy6901/05/05

Delightful!

Holy crap, rainy! I need a cold shower! This is sizzling, and a very nice mix of concrete and abstract imagery-- very much like the act itself.

I was distracted by the "customer" reference, partly because I could not reconcile it with "promoting a king". I also wondered about an apparent narrator change in the last stanza.

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