the poor guy needs to be allowed to cum in the morning, you need to add a chapter !
well written and a very good erotic story. But what a wimp
What a great idea to release your story in very short chapters! You made your readers suffer, like the guy tied helplessly to the bed.
Finally figured outthe motive behind all the wimpy men in your stories, a sub might (or should) have a safe word. The wimps don't have an agreement to end a session and almost all of your work is a Femdom category (which the listings do not have) with wimpy men having surrendered their balls long years back.
Did not like the story of wimpy, but that has little to do with the quality of story.
Someone help us understand the humor here - this is supposed to be comedic right?? Why isn't this in the non-erotic catagory??
Oh, I see it now. She's 300 pounds - he's 140 pounds. She's malicious and he's a brainless wimp. Now I see the humor and the so believeable sensualness of this??? What red blooded male wouldn't love this - HUH?
Perhaps you can do better?
Are there people who really enjoy this garbage? I can only assume they are real man haters, yet the writer is a male? Mystified
What a total tease and, for that reason, completely fascinating and interesting! Keep up the good work. I'd love to see more stories like this one!
of responses! I'm not surprised that this kind of thing either does it for you or it doesn't . . . but I am a little surprised that some people react so negativly. Hey, stories with guys kissing don't do it for me, so I don't read them. What's the big deal?
For my part I'm a long time fan of Peter's work and I think this is one of the best. And I *love* the ending!
No patience. I wouldn't want to have this done to me all the time, but sex is generally more intense after prolonged arousal -- which is what really happens in these stories.
Only suggestions I can offer are (a) please continue the series, (b) continue to introduce new characters (perhaps another couple), and (c) perhaps some discreet public play between the characters.
i'm a Domme and i have to tell you that this is just what we do and the guys love it....they BEG for it, they WANT it...
because it creates the best orgasm ever...or not!
and the guys who are into it are NOT wimps they are some of the most controlled guys in RL....that's why this kind of play is so addictive. it allows the to prolong the agony of the build up! i have tasks even i give to my men....where they can EDGE an X # of times a day...without cumming. it's delightful! for both of us!
i liked it
I rather like these, especially the ending, having to -- er, fall asleep with two women teasing you all night.
cant wait for the next story to come out so I can find out what happens in the morning.
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