All Comments on 'Monster's Theory'

Enjoyed. Finish please.

I really enjoyed this. I would definitely like to see a conclusion. It has so many ways it can end that I am curious to see which way you go with it.

I'm intrigued to say the least I vote for the story to be finished please

Couldn't make head or tail of who was who in the flashback section.

You have kids, flasbacks, parents, security details, monsters etc, and no glue. Nothing connects this.

More please

There's nothing wrong with your story IMO. It just requires a certain level of intelligence that most people either don't have, or are too lazy to apply. It doesn't have to have all the answers written out in the first chapter. Neither should there be a limit to the number of parties involved. So ignore anonymous's comment. What does matter is the delivery.

You have a unique writing style that's very astute. Had it not been for the British syntax, I would have a hard time believing English is not your first language. Personally, I got it. And I have a rough idea where this is going, but I like it. Just remember most of the reader base on this site are just not here for this level of authorship, hence the hate.

Do your thing though and bring on the next installment. Quite a number of us expect it.

A very enjoyable read that leaves me wanting for more. Really hope you continue this story!

Looking forward to many more chapters and who needs to read sex when the stories this good.

Absolutely continue this story.

really good story.......what a beautiful story ..i dont need sex when there stories like these ..wow bro just wow

Really good stuff totally got lost in to that world. Your good hope you keep it going. Can’t wait for more!

It jumps around so that the reader never really understands what is really happening. It switches between reality into fairy tales! If it were a movie instead of written text it might be more understandable since a movie would change the background when moving between reality and fairy tale. Unfortunately the author has no way to differentiate between reality and fairy tale.

Certainly interesting but a bit too confusing and messy. Is it because it's the first chapter?

Nothing like a bit of excitement. All the better for not knowing what is happeneing exactly. Much, much more, please.

A jumbled mess of a story, just not worth the time to read or want to continue. Don't care about anyone nor do I care to find out what is going on.

i’ve never been so confused before