by bumpercars
Reminded me of my yout', when i was similarly slow to catch on.
5 stars, thanks for reminding me of that sense of wonder.
Axelotto and NorthPacific,
Thanks for your feedback. I'm glad you liked the story.
Your writing style is amazing and the way you made the story so simple and absorbing was great. You can't imagine how grateful I am to you for writing it. I loved every single bit about it. I found it a few days ago and I've been constantly re-reading it since then. Just.. I think I was addicted to literotica for around a year focusing on incest stories with no intimacy, but this really is different. I don't think I'll go back to incest after this... Please make another chapter. I can't describe how much this story means to me and.. thank you so much for it.
I am very glad that the story meant so much to you. I do hope that you don't beat up on yourself for whatever kinks you have - fantasies don't hurt anyone.
I do plan on writing more stories, many of which will be in this same romantic vein. I hope you'll enjoy them as well. I can't swear that I'll do a direct sequel to this story, but I'll consider it.
Be well.
I liked how you captured the beginnings of a relationship.
I also enjoyed the humour!
Thank you for your story.
You have a flair for creating a somewhat politically aware sense of dialog between these two folks who both want each other but are hesitant to admit it.
the humor is an added plus.
Happy Singles Awareness Day to all!
The vivid details and storytelling felt as if this was not erotica, but nostalgia. Good writing, keep it up
This was good. This is your first story I read - guess I will have to read more now.
FaithfulToWife,
I'm glad you liked it. I write across a few categories and genres, but I hope you enjoy what you read.