All Comments on 'Before the Wedding Ch. 02'

That is better, but there is so much we do not as readers know about your characters yet. on another point it is hard as a reader to know, or get a feeling for the story a page at a time.I know it takes a lot of time to write , edit, and final proof, and so far it is appreciated, maybe an author's note on intent and continuance might be helpful.

Looking forward to more.

NorthPacific

You had a good concept going. But you only have one comment below from 4 years ago. I'm guessing that this is as far as you got and didn't follow up. It is a crying shame. You had the makings of a Polyamorous FFM Triad started and it could have been really good. But like so many other authors on this site, you couldn't find the effort to finish what you started. I'm not surprised. 3/5 once again.