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A Birthday Surprise

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by skip.6901/01/05

Short, but....

Short but enough to make a story. Wish my wife would do that! I have to beg for it even on my birthday!

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by Xploremyworld01/02/05

I Loved The Story!

Short and concise... Interesting and tittilating! My take is that you and your wife (assuming this accounting to have actually happened) are very fortunate, in that you both have the creativity to keep the love (and sex) lively and entertaining to each other. Keep on doing what you're doing and don't be concerned about those who only have sex one Thursday each month, in the dark between 8:00 pm and 8:05 pm. Way to go!!

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by Anonymous01/02/05

Lucky bastard

Heyyy jstherra,
That was good, and I really enjoyed your writing. A plus also, upon reflection, I found your story humorous.
Well written.
Rudy

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by Bridget6911/28/05

A nice quickie...

that shows that sometimes the spontaneous acts are better than the planned ones.

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by Anonymous05/23/06

quite good

very good story, I love it and read it with my wift, hopefuly it would happened on me. ahah

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by Anonymous07/19/06

Great Story

This story is good.

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by Anonymous10/21/06

Is there more to come?

This was a wonderful story... and it left me wanting to hear more of what Donna may have planned for her husband as his birthday continued to unfold... I hope soon you will tell us more about thier lunch and the rest of their day... ;-)

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by nesher04/17/08

A Great Story...

And a beautiful woman!!!

Nesher

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by Anonymous06/02/11

Nice Surprise

a very quuick erotic read. hope you enjoyed your birthday surprise ;)

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by Anonymous08/03/16

Fucking Flat........

The second photo was good but what happened to the first? The husband sounds like all he wants is sex, he really reminds me of the ex in the Bridesmaid movie. You know? The one that always wants a blowjob from his ex? That is one of the big fucking downers of that movies, that and a shit load of others. Now back to your ‘story’, it’s fucking FLATE. The build up is shitty. And I found some of the dialog pretty shitty too. And as for the wife she kind of sounds like a slut. Despite her age aht? 40 years old roughly. You do need to fill in some plot holes, such as what about the ‘kids’? And how in the hell did the slut wife.... I mean wife got there and what the fuck happed to her damn close? Etc? On the bright side it makes a great B Rated Porn Movie. Or perhaps just a single low budget Porn Scene.

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