All Comments on 'Could She Really be a Cougar? Ch. 01'

A.R., you are so talented! Glad you came up with another story! Rated you 5 stars even though you hit one of my biggest gripes! I realize it may be too late because the horse has left the barn, and people have been making the mistake for so long that it is now commonly accepted as correct! But, to me it's wrong and always will be. Yes, I'm a grump about this, and I will not apologize! It's properly a "chaise longue" and not a "chaise lounge"! The furniture piece is a long chair, which it is. It's a "chaise longue", the French that translates to long chair. However, the "hoi polloi" didn't look closely and changed the French word "longue" to the incorrect "lounge". So please stop calling it a "chaise lounge"! It almost cost you a star! I strongly suspect you know better. And, for all you people that think I'm being petty, tough! It is one of those things that drives me crazy!

Yes, Yes, Yes. Keep it going. Can't wait for part 2.

Every time I think AltheaRose can't top herself, she makes me a fool. This new story is sexy, funny and is leaving me wanting more. As always, I feel like I am right there in the middle of all the action and the characters feel as if I've known them my whole life. Great work. Thank you, AltheaRose.

Very well written. Sexy situations. Fun characters.

Bring on chapter 2, love the way you write. Cant wait to read the rest of this story, thanks for writing again

Breathlessly waiting for Chapter 2!!

AltheaRose,

It is always wonderful to read your tales. You have such a talent.

Keeping a watch for the next chapter.

Thank you.

Thanks Althea, brilliant as usual. It is refreshing as always to read your excellent writing.

Loved it and can't wait for chapter 2!

The second of yours I've read after Brave New World. I love the way you tease the setup for future chapters. Looking forward to more.

Hooked on your writing ever since I read "Girl Power".

It’s really unfair having to wait more than a day or two for the next chapter. Hot! Hot! Hot!

Althea, you don't really write stories, you paint pictures and scenes with words. You always give us such good visuals!

Not as magical for me as Brave New World, which was unbeatable. But I'm really looking forward to ch.2.

Barry

This was an easy read with the story line flowing nicely. I look forward to reading more.

A.F.C. Somerset

Whew, Cody I hope you've been holding off for a day or two. I think your about to meet your match. She now intends to light your fuse. Oh Cody, way to play it cool my young fool, and your not fooling me. Ladies I know you know, we like it when you use your words and they say, nice cock, there, right there, I'M cummmminnngg.

Luv your stories all of them all are smartly worded and very telling, call me?

I loved it. So well written and portrayed

Thx Althea. I'm glad that I discovered you!!

Great story. Beautifully written with a nice amount of humour and realism. Glad I discovered this gem. I have to admit I felt a real pang when I came to the end of the story, first thing I did was check that there was a part two. I love it when a story gets you invested in the characters.

What I really appreciate is the way you and your characters are so positive and abundant about sex. And even better, how much you and all of them clearly enjoy and value all parts of all bodies. It is wonderful to witness the joys of young and old, male and female - all kinds, all orifices, all protruberances!

A sexy story, well written, what’s not to like.

Total five.

Your scene’s with dialogue are terrific.

It’s obvious you take pride in your prose and you should!