All Comments on 'The Picnic'

Very well thought out, written, and presented. Now if I could only find a T girl like her.

Lovely story. I usually prefer the dominant t-girl stories and romantic stories aren’t my cup of tea. The length was just right. If it had run for 4/5 pages I think I would have lost interest. I’d rather have a 6/7 page story split into 3 chapters posted at the same time to maintain my interest. Only my personal view of course and other readers views will vary.

Sweet story