This is one story I'd like to see more of. A really great first submission.
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Anonymous01/17/05
superb
d story was superb but if Sarah could hv been a bit more relutant first then gave in later ( i felt she gave in too fast)....d story would hv been wonderful....i greatly enjoyed d story.....once again superb story
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Anonymous01/17/05
hit the spot
really love stories of seduction, i agree that sarah could have been a bit more reluctant but all the same mmmm very very good haha
dancarter18@hotmail.com
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Anonymous01/20/05
Thanks!
Awesome story, especially for the first one. I loved how you slowly drew out the action and detailed the descriptions of the characters. Please write more.
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Anonymous01/29/05
hot
As a teacher this really got to me, more please........
English
Hot Story
Scorching hot story, simple and straight forward. The use of & instead of and was a little annoying though.
impressive
i really like the way you built it up with the dancing before the really fiery stuff.
You crammed a lot into one page!
Great Story!
This is one story I'd like to see more of. A really great first submission.
superb
d story was superb but if Sarah could hv been a bit more relutant first then gave in later ( i felt she gave in too fast)....d story would hv been wonderful....i greatly enjoyed d story.....once again superb story
hit the spot
really love stories of seduction, i agree that sarah could have been a bit more reluctant but all the same mmmm very very good haha
dancarter18@hotmail.com
Thanks!
Awesome story, especially for the first one. I loved how you slowly drew out the action and detailed the descriptions of the characters. Please write more.
hot
As a teacher this really got to me, more please........
Hot story
Very good story, well defined. And I would bet Sarah would be late getting home quite a few evenings now, especially the next few days!!!
I loved it...I love it
Tim just got hold to a pretty sexy wife and took advaantage. The wife loved it and will keep it her secret.
I loved it...I love it
Tim just got hold to a pretty sexy wife and took advaantage. The wife loved it and will keep it her secret.
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