All Comments on 'In a New Neighborhood Pt. 01'

That’s all! More and as soon as possible!

well written . more please soon! have to say it made maggies pussy wet as well reading this!!!

Once you've been blacked there's no going back. Steph's relationship with her fiance' is over and Karen is next. I can hardly wait for part 2.

Thank you very much! Write rather 2, 3, 4 parts of the story.

Hot fucking shit. Lil white girls need black cock. Stuff them tiny pussies full stretch them out.

That homo Eric gonna get Julius’ fat dick up his ass too. Sissy boy gonna love that shit.

Really enjoyed this! More please, soon

A wonderful start to this story! I love Karen how is evolving from a feeling of disgust/irritation with her new neighbors to now beginning to be enraptured by them. I can only hope her evolution will continue and she will be on her way to being a new woman. Please don't rush things along and keep up this nice slow churn.

...DP

Can’t wait for her to find out how floppy and not very hard a black dick is! And getting that STD to boot! Lol

Really hot, looking forward to more. Maybe even get Eric in on a little guy/guy or fluffing. Xoxoxoxoxoxoxo Annette

Right from the start she called them thugs and he drug dealers. Not every black perdón is a drug dealer and few will openly do drugs and deal next to their homes. As adults they would already br in jail being this stupid. And would not call attention to themselves by yelling out like that and acting that way to adult white stuck up neighbors. Not all white men are bitches around black men. He should be sucking sick the way he is acting few black men have huge dicks just like any man. Huge disks are rare and most thugs with big dicks suck in bed. Need an educated black man with a huge dick to make women cheat and chase after him. This is just the same story over and over. You are an excellent writer but be original. You can hear people taking through thin walls not ceilings. Need to live next door

You do understand this was erotic fiction, don't you? Perhaps you should stick to your public library.

Your white slut cheering section is in full voice. Not enough that the wife is a whore, but let's get the husband to suck some black cock too. You sluts who love this crap disgust me more than the men who wrote it.

Thank goodness for that slut, otherwise no one would like this crap.

Great story and plot. Can`t wait for the next chapter.

Can not wait for the next chapter. Hope for some group sex and that Eric gets engaged in sucking dicks.

Thank you for a well-written first chapter

Love this story. I hope the husband gets to clean up some creampies and his wife gets knocked up.

I really wanna read what kind of gang bang Karen end up with...

excellent ... very really beautiful story ... you're a good writer of interracial stories .

Mo! Mo! Mo!

p.s. Don't forget the Anal!

Can't wait for part 2 and hopefully a part 3 breeding

Well written. Sure hope you have another chapter in the works. Would love if if Steph's attitude opens the lovely wife up (so to speak) - the further the better. Might be interesting to see Julius put some prison moves on the husband, too.

Hopefully you don't go down the stereotypical wimp cuck route that 99% of other storiea take, every action has consequences.

I can't wait for the rest of this!

the potential of becoming a 10 part classic i/r story and sure 5star***** winner

it's only in its infancy and has room to include supreme cucking interracial insemination plus the rare seldom seen but entirely hottttt TWO cucks commiserating and moaning on each other's white shoulders .................two pregnancies two cucks two white sluts .....................I see a beatdown in Eric's and Mark's future as they get lippy with their black masters

I agree with a previous poster -- no wimpy cuck stuff and no need for any beat down crap. I'd like to see Eric and get into what obviously is going to happen with at least Jason. Hopefully Eric and Mark will learn to let all the men use Karen and Steph whenever and however they want.

I just hope that we don’t have to wait very long for the next chapter. Can’t wait to see the scenario when Jason fucks Karen and when all three guys fuck the girls together.

Brilliant, amazing, near perfect white wife seducing story.You built up the story in a way it has a great potential to be 4-5 parts series.Loved the way you wrote it from different character's points of views.Please make Karen gets seduced by Jason slowly, dont rush it-you built her character of high morale and it seems she has great respect for marriage, so make her regret when she eventually gets fucked by Jason...also will love if you add a little more detailed description of the both girls dresses for their black lovers.

Carry on the great work!

very nice/hot story. Karen's friend should keep sleeping with shawn and Karen should go black too. maybe both get blacked together in a 4some or gangbang too? that would be hot.

one of the best stories i've ever read .... dooo more real soon have to read part 2

Love how detailed and descriptive you are. Karen can't control herself, she's getting taken soon!!! Please hurry with next chapter!!!

I really dug this story! Can't wait for the next part!

Any chance that you would break the stereotype and have Eric grow a pair either before Karen cheats or even afterwards? We can hope as so many stories take the easy way and stay within the mold.bdfe

I like the story but miss the second part. Hope to be able to read more shortly.

The story is going very well. But why there is no follow up. Every good author nowadays has become GRRM.😔

Great start. You have crafted an excellent beginning. Keep up the good work.

Looking forward to part 2!

Cant wait for part 2

Apart from a few spelling errors, this is another well told tale of a wife/ gf who cannot resist being seduced by the enticement of a bigger cock. We all know what the inevitable outcome will be.

Telling the story through the different 'views' of the husband and the wife is a smart move. That way you can depict the husband's side: "Oh no, what are they doing to my faithful wife? How could she let them do that to her?"

And at the same time you can give the counter-argument of the wife: "I know I shouldn't be doing this but my body is betraying me." Thereby you give the reader a rational reason how the infidelity could come about.

I personally would give a little more descriptive in the sexual/ erotic parts.

Part 2 pls .. waited for a month now

Guy calls it after part one that he thinks Eric will take Julius fat dick in his ass, I didn’t see that but after reading part 2 that’s where it’s going, great call and I agree with you I hope he takes it in the ass and of course he will love it

Too many women with them weak craka ass whtie boys, if god was real then this is what would happen all the time.Probably does anyway. White men are weak. White men are the reason evil exists. They enslaved the world. There phony asses gettin got. Shit I am going make sure all them whtie gurls cheat fo my bbc, one was lookin at me lately. I know she want some pipes cleaned. She going to be twerkin all over my dick by the time I am done with her. Whtie gurls are sluts fo the bbc. Thanks for the story man, keep im comming.

he's most likely has a 1/2 cock and as thick as my white little !!!finger

Thank you...

Amazing start. Can't wait to start reading part 2. I hope this story lasts for a while with all the characters evolving. The 2 whitebois slowly realizing that they are losing and then trying to deal with the fallout and learn to accept their inferiority. Magnificent!

we really need a part 3 for this story! keep up the good work!

You Ignorant, pathetic little man. Just go on projecting your racism on others. We all see who and what you are. Don't worry little boy, run along and play after all you've got Wakanda now. You don't have to rely on "We wuz kangs and shiit" any more.

The story had potential for sure, but the unrealistic character actions (sleeping with men they barely met, even though they're married/fianced, the black men being written as irresistible sex gods even though they are gang members, the fact the women change from loyal to cheating hoes on the flip of a dime as well as much more), the overly long story, like damn do we need the characters entire life stories and much more, really ruin the experience as well as keeps the story very fictionial instead of amazingly realistic.

every asset of this story was spot on, very enjoyable

And just another heartless Cunt and a sissy wimp husband story. Pathetic!!

This is a great story. Brilliantly written, great strong ideas, characters are good and the whole piece is beautifully layered. It is certainly in the top 10 best reads on here, without question.., indeed NOQuestionsAsked or needed here as the story is fluid and needs no changing. The only thing frustrating is that there is no pt. 03. It is a head scratcher that a third part hasn't arrived, this probably would of helped create legendary status. Your choice as a writer, but as a reader this would of been appreciated. Well done, a great story regardless. 10/10

I dont understand why these porn directors do not make a movie out of these stories. This movie could be fucking great.

I would love to see

Karlee Grey as Karen

Abigail Mac as Steph

Jason luv as Jason

Jason brown or Prince Yahshua as Shawn

Very well written.

loved it

Alcohol and curiosity are such a dangerous combination...dangerously fun. Well done, quite realistic.

This story makes me feel like a girl. I feel like Karen fighting my guilty greed to suck down the cum from big black cocks. I hope Karen has met one or more of Jason's big black cock friends. Karen is now a greedy slut willing to serve a gang of big black cocks even if her husband walks in. She will feel better about showing Eric her true desire for big black cocks. She will surrender to big black cocks while Eric watches. She won't stop.

I’d love to see them get Karen high and tease her, letting her see how their cocks fill out their pants. Start slow, just getting her to “feel it”. Love her weakening as she sits next to him holding his big black cock in her small white hand. Unable to stop looking at it eventually she leans over to lick it and sucks it as her head swirls.

It makes her feel so nasty sucking a blackcock as he just sits back and watches her. Not having to force her or even ask, all he does is quietly say , you like that big blackcock don’t you? You look so good, it’s what you wanted to do.

Love seeing her being hooked as her husband lets it happen.

Fuck that white pussy up! Gawd it’s good.

The story was great and I was hoping for a part 3, however after 5 years it does not seem to be happening any time soon. So I made my own ending to the 4 characters in the story, it may not be has great as what was written before. But I tried to bring it to a close even tho it may not be a good ending it is a ending none the less. Just to let the author know if he or she is still out their I will not take credit for the ending at all. I just wanted an ending to a great story

Superb so far. Very believable unlike a lot of stories on here.

Well written

Well written. The reluctance and wanton surrender are so stimulating.