All Comments on 'beta Alpha'

Sorry but not enjoyable for me

Should be in the Non consent category as the "alpha" male is just a rapist asshole

I hope you continue the story. It’s so hot to be dominated by a real man Alpha, can’t wait to see how much a humiliated little slave boy the beta bitch becomes

Andy is not a man ! He is a sub human bully rapist asshole . Amazing that he did not need to show up with four confederates . As most bullies usually need to do .

I hope that the protagonist is due to meet with a hero knight in shining armor .

Good story , as it does touch nerves .

Sissies everywhere will relate to this & enjoy it!

Should have gone to the kitchen to get the 'brew' and called the police,then found someone worth the air they're breathing.

Love this story! You captured how so many of us want to feel in the hands of a big, strong, masculine, alpha guy. Please keep writing! I look forward to chapter 2. xo

If only I had answered that door. I would be his wife by now! Lord, I would have loved that so much! Just to be taken, used, loved, and man-handled. A girl's sweet dream, mine!

Roxanne, His Woman

Please write another. Don't fuss too much about the comments to the effect that you posted in the wrong category. If this had been in non-Consent, people there would have faulted it for being gay.

My favorite stories (and the ones I've written) involve men "going gay" in front of friends or relatives - there's a lot of humiliation in them.

Donald Elliott11

Very hot, I'd love to see more.

Please write more. I never comment on stories but I think you have a lot of potential

wow, I've always wanted to be dominated in such a fashion, keep the story going please.

babe no!!! honestly felt like a slap in the face to see that word spelled like that ahahaha. its jizz! please just say jizz. or cum. or anything that doesnt make me picture, like, a cheeky robot from a cartoon.

other than that this story was perfect x

time to pack your bags and get the hell out he will always be aa bully get out while you can call the cops to get you out if need be

I loved it, excellently written, thank you very much, I've been reading on here for quite some time now and this is the first time I've ever felt so good about it that I just had to leave a comment. So this is my first comment and the first story I actually slowed down to really read. Thank you, amazing work.

This is the best story I read on this website. I have to leave my first comment. Please don't drop it and keep writing.

This is one of the best stories I've ever seen!

It's important that, in the course of taking ownership of the beta, the Alpha spank the beta to tears. It's a way to absolutely confirm the helpless, child-like status of the beta.

Very hot, well written, good pace.

Loved the way the sissy accepted defeat, followed by perfect TMC (Total Masculinity Cancellation).

I was compelled to get on my knees and jerk off!

Thanks,

Bitsy