It was a little short... but it was stll a good story... You should write more in detail... and for im a bit more in 3'rd person... It makes it more interesting for all readers...
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Anonymous10/05/09
Employment
That girl could sue your ass, you motherfucker.
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Anonymous02/28/12
The Present
Great Story! Remember the day my own wife was given a surprise by another
mans wife this way. I almost came in my pants and my wife actually did, but
in the women face. Was a real turn on for me! My shy wife returned for a
second time 'to sin again' the following month.
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Anonymous04/30/13
Give more descriptive details in the form of dialogue
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Anonymous09/10/14
Sally and Angela
I love Angela hairy pussy.I love to read somemore about Sally and Angela.
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Anonymous02/27/15
Beautiful Story
Beautiful Story :Rather short, but a very good Story Line. Yes the setting has been created for there to be Sequells :Yes, You ought to write some more and describe the second and third episodes and other adventures Sally and Husband have with Angie. If you want to take it further, Angie brings in another Girl..
Another chapter would be great. Give more details and take your time writing. You have the talent. Expand and suspend us with details.
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Anonymous04/21/16
wife
I WOULD LOVE TO GET ANOTHER WOMAN IN BED WITH MY WIFE AND WATCd3cbH HER GET EATEN WHILE SHE SUCKED MY COCK.
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Anonymous05/23/16
The love of my life is finally back to stay for good
My wife left me because i was always drinking and even when i did everything to bring her back, she refused and told me it was over between us... For months i was helpless and restless because i could not get my wife back so one days as i was sitting in my office thinking and doing some research on the internet on how to get my wife back i saw many testimonies on how Doctor Ororo has help people with his spell so i immediately contacted him via email and today i am very glad that my wife came back to me within 12 to 16 hours just as Doctor Ororo promised me and now i strongly believe that Doctor Ororo is a God on Earth. My name is Kenny charles from USA and my contact number is +1 260-272-0826... Do you need help contact him for help via email: doctorororospelltemple@outlook.com or website: http://doctorazuaworldofpowerfulspell.webs.com or via Whats App or call: +2348068784784
English
More, please!
More!!!
Not Bad at all...
It was a little short... but it was stll a good story... You should write more in detail... and for im a bit more in 3'rd person... It makes it more interesting for all readers...
Employment
That girl could sue your ass, you motherfucker.
The Present
Great Story! Remember the day my own wife was given a surprise by another
mans wife this way. I almost came in my pants and my wife actually did, but
in the women face. Was a real turn on for me! My shy wife returned for a
second time 'to sin again' the following month.
Give more descriptive details in the form of dialogue
Sally and Angela
I love Angela hairy pussy.I love to read somemore about Sally and Angela.
Beautiful Story
Beautiful Story :Rather short, but a very good Story Line. Yes the setting has been created for there to be Sequells :Yes, You ought to write some more and describe the second and third episodes and other adventures Sally and Husband have with Angie. If you want to take it further, Angie brings in another Girl..
Another chapter would be great. Give more details and take your time writing. You have the talent. Expand and suspend us with details.
wife
I WOULD LOVE TO GET ANOTHER WOMAN IN BED WITH MY WIFE AND WATCd3cbH HER GET EATEN WHILE SHE SUCKED MY COCK.
The love of my life is finally back to stay for good
My wife left me because i was always drinking and even when i did everything to bring her back, she refused and told me it was over between us... For months i was helpless and restless because i could not get my wife back so one days as i was sitting in my office thinking and doing some research on the internet on how to get my wife back i saw many testimonies on how Doctor Ororo has help people with his spell so i immediately contacted him via email and today i am very glad that my wife came back to me within 12 to 16 hours just as Doctor Ororo promised me and now i strongly believe that Doctor Ororo is a God on Earth. My name is Kenny charles from USA and my contact number is +1 260-272-0826... Do you need help contact him for help via email: doctorororospelltemple@outlook.com or website: http://doctorazuaworldofpowerfulspell.webs.com or via Whats App or call: +2348068784784
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