All Comments on 'Daddy's Perfect Fucktoy Pt. 04'

1st I've read of this series. Going to read the others now. Well done. 4 stars

DragonRider55

Omg please write part 5 I can’t handle the waiting 😭 This story is so hot if my Daddy fucked me like that I don’t think I could resist either.

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE please.

So perfect, I need more. I dream of this being my life

Please write more. My juices are flowing so much from this.

Love this series! Please keep writing on it!!!! I wanna know about Daddy, Baby slut and George!

This chapter was as great as the others! Please please please put up another chapter soon.

You are gifted... more please ?:)

One of my favorites series Ever keep going

Wonderful plot and very well written! You have a special talent. I believe that this story can have many more chapters as Emily continues her slide to becoming a bigger slut. Hope your fans don't have wait too long for the next installment. Thank you!

I loved all of them and just finished this one. I need a part 5!!!

soo good I cant wait till the two men fuck her

I crave, no I NEED more! Please can I have more? I loved reading your story and cumming hard. Daddy needs to show her so much more to make her a true fucktoy! Please! I promise to be a good girl and re-read the whole story to my "Daddy". Maybe we will read some things to try.

I get so wet reading this

This series is so fucking hot. I've creamed my pants over and over. I really want to read about Emily getting it from both Jake and George. I'd love to see how far Daddy will degrade her.

please continue this one.

I really enjoyed reading this story please write more.

Another star lost for abandoned series...

amazing story and I can't fucking wait for the next part to cum out!

I loved this story disappointed I can't send private feedback to the writer. Disappointed also that she doesn't appear to want to continue this as I truly believe she has a real talent for writing . Or maybe she is off developing that talent elsewhere. I do hope she reads this and decides that along with all the other commentators she will be missed.

I was really hoping to read Emily finally getting a DP.

Shame that the story stopped here.

Waiting for dp.

Why did you stop writing? So sad as this is siper hot

Great store!!! Why did you stop writing? Your great at spinning a store.

Holy shit this series is good. Crazy hot for such short chapters too - most writers can't achieve in 5 pages what you do in under 2. You should seriously consider writing/publishing a collection of these types of stories. I'd buy it

Pls post more. I love this story.

Hopefully you will be able to finish the story. There are several options that are possible to finishing the story. Maybe you can write several different endings? I like stories that have several different finishes instead of just one. Usually some stories just stop without any endings. It seems surprising that her daddy even was able to go to some meetings without being so exhausted. She can make a lot of money in Vegas while he is at meetings. She could even end up as a painslut in a BDSM setting. Please, write a few endings for her.

Still holding out hope that you’ll return to this one day. Dying to see how Emily handles two dirty old men.

Please continue this!! I know it's been years but please or at least someone continue this

Please please continue this! My pussy is throbbing reading this, do fucking wet and hot 🥵

OK, I'm going to be different from the other posters I've read. I started skipping part due to my dissatisfaction & wound up one part as Emily's father's whipping her ass with a belt. I need read no more. Neither will I search for any of your other stories. Everyone's entitled to their opinion. Mine, this's just bad.

This is great it needs more lots more

EMILY THE DESPERATE IMMATURE GREEDY BITCH WHO HAD TO HAVE GEORGE GET HIS WAY!! SLUT

Story was interesting but could have back on some of the harsh punishment. Keeping writing and I will keep reading.

I would love a continuation of this story! I get so wet reading about this Daddy taking charge of his little slut, and now the possibility of him allowing others to use her. Damn.

Latest story published in 02/2018 doubt if there will be a sequel.

Ease continue I'm wanting more from Emily

Needs to continue, want to read about. Her and George funding in front of Dad. Several other people in Vegas.

I'm so into this series. I hope you write more some day!

A great series.

With a rebel yell she cried, "More, more, MORE!!!"

When can i read about her fucking both of them?

Please continue

This is what you should probably have said . Howling with pleasure, he filled his baby girl's thirsty cunt knowing more deliciously perverted times were ahead for them both including the son or daughter he might have just got his slutty daughter Emily pregnant with

The whole slut & fuck toy name calling in the stories is eye rollingly bad

Please write another one. Preferably with Daddy and another older guy. Maybe an uncle or just the older guy.

Please continue these rule. Maybe one with 2 or 3 older guys, uncle and they old dude with daddy and his girl? Please. Me and my girl love them.

I wish my father used me like a slut and a fucktoy!!!! My cunt needs to be abused and I’m a cock hungry whore who needs to be punished.

Nice story. More please.

This was so amazingly hot! My Daddy read it and now when he wants to play he now calls me BabySlut! Next chapter please

I really love this series. Please write more!

OK. I'm ready for the next part, please. Daddy and George need it too. Emily needs to go to DP heaven.

Keep me coming.. MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE

love daddy daughter incest. So taboo

Why did you stop? Please continue the rest, more chapters to finish

Fabulous story. I hope you can pick it up again.

Seeing u no longer go on here is it okay someone takes over

Well, too bad the story ends here. It would have been fun to find out just how far Emily is going to go down this path of slutdom with her daddy. Will she get pregnant or will daddy take care of her? She is still only 18 but when will she finally realize that she has no life except as a fucktoy for her father? Will he take her out to sex clubs, gloryholes, frat parties, sorority parties, homeless/immigrant camps for a few days, or ???

Ugh. Unlike others here I'm glad you stopped. You turned Emily from a loyal loving slut to a fucking stupid slut. The only person the Dad loves is himself.

Not a fan, totally self indulgent. Looks like he wants to turn daughter into whore for his pleasure. Glad it ended

Ergh.I totally agree with the last two comments, there's no love anymore from the father, tbh George's actions and the fathers thoughts utterly disgusted me... Other parts of the story was ok, but this last chapter gets 1/2 star, and a note to self to never read again...

I wish my daddy would have used me for a pay to play