All Comments on 'Four Nights Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Four Nights

This is a great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. The plot and the descriptions are very erotic and kept me totally aroused and eager for more.

BEERQUACKBEERQUACKabout 6 years ago
sweet

hope theirs more nights to come

argeelogargeelogabout 6 years ago
Outstanding

Great writing and plot. Please keep it going....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Many more chapters, please

You have probably thought of this, but could Azure ask Tela to dance at the club, perhaps on amateur night or on an audition basis?

Rickd_1960Rickd_1960about 6 years ago
Give us more!

Very good writing. Please hurry and give us more chapters.

NoH8redNoH8redabout 6 years ago
Looking forward to more

Really enjoyed this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I enjoyed it until

Tela just became an easy slut! Enjoyed it more when she was a bit reluctant and her lust made her do things she felt guilty about later. All too soon you just had an easy whore who,would do anything with anyone... big deal!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good depictions, but to rapid of progression

I know that the story is called "Four Nights", but the progression from repressed sexuality to a foursome seems a bit rapid. The story is hot, but it would be even hotter if the progression was more plausible. It's the plausibility coupled with hot sex scenes that really strikes at the core of the libido. It makes one imagine that "yeah, this might happen to me someday." LOL!

I still gave it a 4, but would've liked to give it a 4.5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I was excited to the end

That story was the most amazing erotic story I have ever read keep up the good work I look forward to four nights part 2 through 100

ronibarretronibarretabout 2 years ago

Excellent story. Reawakening a wife's desire like this.

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