All Comments on 'Man Meets Woman'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Never try to win a Literotica contest

in this category. Voters are too divided.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Well done 5.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good story

But you fell short on style points... even for a flash

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionabout 6 years ago
Fun

Yes, fun to read, too! But LW is a harder audience than Sauckiehall Street on a Friday night!

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 6 years ago
Meh

Second person POV, present tense just doesn't work for me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Unbelievable

Even for fiction. I think the bartender laughs in her face and tells her to take her smoking outside. Nobody wants someone ruining their drink or the air they breath by having a smoker near them. No one wants to kiss a smoker. Can you say "eeewwwwww"? And his wife has so little self control that she needs to troll men in a bar like a hooker to get her excited enough to have sex with her husband? What a nasty, unlikable woman. The only fools here are the readers that wasted their time reading this nonsense.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Samuel_T_Cucksley says "schwanze" is Arabic for

"cuck in a closet"

Justgr8Justgr8about 6 years ago
Hmmm

I see you don't post much in LW, thanks for introducing us to your work and good luck with the competition.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Garbage

Here's a friendly hint. Stay out of loving wives. Your stories do fine in BDSM and I'll never have to read them. But you have no talent for a loving wives story. Stick with the sick garbage you know best.

joefeltonjoefeltonalmost 5 years ago
another anonymous chicken shit comment

Ignore these assholes! They don't own romantic wives!

eibirbeibirbover 3 years ago

What an odd lot of commentators!

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

No matter what the tense, this sucks.

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