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by jamma32

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story, but...

The constant changing of tense from past to present, sometimes in the same sentence, really got annoying. Pick one or the other and stick to it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great

Story. I love it. Altho I'd dearly like to know more about each other's background. No biggie. Any chance of a prequel? Or part 2? The cabin area sounds heavenly! Great work Jamma. Personal experience perhaps? 5 stars

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