All Comments on 'Liz and Sue Ch. 01'

Too much of a masculine POV. If the writer is a lesbian or a woman I'll eat my knee implant. The paraplegic fetish is interesting but told from a very masculine POV. Not much empathy here & a serious lack of emotions. The writer's narrative is structured in a way that keeps us at a distance rather than involving us in the characters.

It's a shame because this couldve been a very intense story. As written, it was a hodgepodge list of cool things about each character without any rhyme or reason. Why is it important that one woman is ex-CIA & the other an ex NY investment wiz? Didnt have a thing to do with the story. No plot, no backstory that enables the reader to relate to & care about either character.

This has the ability to be an awesome series. Great writing and imagery. Waiting for part 2.