All Comments on 'Fulfilling a Promise'

Written simply and wonderfully as usual, still this time I had some problem. What you mentioned yourself, and what came across to me as well was the sense of awkwardness but not the erotic connection between Jerry and the narrator. Perhaps it was too abrupt, perhaps the context of going over his dead brother's last stuff -it just did not make me feel that I could buy it. But for a reader who may read this prior to reading the story - please make up your mind on your own, imsally is a darn good writer...

Short but real. He was a part of her friend Lee, and she was a sexual woman. They had shared a connection briefly and the sex was a way to say goodbye... I liked it.

Good read. Thanks for sharing.