All Comments on 'Out of Town Out of Mind'

The moralizing at the end - him having to leave a marriage where he cheated by blaming his wife - was out of place. Other than that, it was a good start.

How can this be.? Great story, great writing

ie. sentence structure, punctuation, plot development.

I find it hard to believe that there hasn’t been a comment

in SIX years.

I was emotionally drawn into the MC loneliness and life in

a failing marriage, which he realized was partly his fault.

Reading about their sexual disconnection was painful and

too common in a long term relationship. And finally the failure

of insight and empathy made me hope that this was fiction and

not a biological lament. Well done.

shr