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by WickedEve01/03/05

:)

This is really nice:
poised
in a vessel of flesh
the soul settled
serenely

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by sack01/03/05

I feel tranquil......

For the moment, LOL!! Did you mean exceptance=acceptance?

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by Du Lac01/04/05

What will we do with Art???

Art honey lol.. you are the tranquil anti-conformist lol.. denying yourself the pleasures of spell check lol.. did you hear my giggles as I read ride the through the air??? Loved this Art, as always you write, I read, my mind flips a couple of times.. shakes off the dust and suddenly there is nothing there...oh tranquilty..lol

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