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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ok

Not bad. A little longer maybe. Your 1st story PointSix? Great beginning? Damned good start. Love to read more along this line.

DragonRider55

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 6 years ago
not bad

pretty good first story, but a few points, DS are not allowed to strike a recruit, you did not say when this story takes place, in the past they did but not in today's basic training and also male and female recruits are not put into the same squad other than that a good start

Taurus03Taurus03about 6 years ago
More

Please continue the story. I think it has teeth

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Keep going!

This is awesome! Keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Keep going!

Please!

PointSixPointSixabout 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you all so much!

Thank you guys! to answer a few comments:

yes, this is my first story ever :D

this story is set in the future, where the army is a bit more relaxed and gender norms like co ed squadrons are a bit more regular. I was really hesitant to make something like this, as it's not only my first time writing a sexual story, but the first time i've ever made a story up whole cloth. You guys have inspired me to try and continue this with another chapter, maybe a bit longer this time. Thank you all so much again!

-PointSix

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I swear to god

Finish this goddamn story. Please. Just. Please. I’ve gotten attached to too many characters that weren’t given proper closure.

I AM BEGGING YOU TO FINISH THIS

Xzy89c1Xzy89c1about 6 years ago
Good start!!!

Looking forward to the rest. One quibble: a sergeant is not an officer so would not be in officers quarters. Maybe military folks will correct me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hilarious!

Short and to the point. Well done. Do a little more investigation about the military to make your story believable. Besides that... Nice embarrassing situation. Two thumbs up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Well I'm Intrigued, 5-Stars Intrigued,,, Yes!

Hallo PointSix!

Drill Sergeant Lain, sounds really hot! .... And I'm interested, to see how you're going to describe, a straight girls first time sexual lesbian experience.... I have been with a lot of so called straight girls, you know the ones: (Oh-No-No! Not-Me!.... I'm not a lesbian! .... I'm just curious, to know why any girl would want to do something like that, with another girl!).... Some of those girls were very-very curious, hundreds of euros curious,,, and I was more than happy to take their money, and satisfy all of their curiosity. :-)

Gay Kat.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenalmost 6 years ago
Interesting read!

This was a little different from my normal reading pattern, but so far I'm enjoying it. Thanks for sharing it with us!

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